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look at void

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Dead, of body and soul.


Future of blind terror, because the light was in the past.


That light that gave happiness is now an illusion,  just a memory.


And now, a black image for the eternity.

An old work from the school, I tried to reflect that "empty feeling" in a simple poem. This could be considered my first poem ever. (at least, I can´t remember another one more old).
Damn! sometimes the translation could make a real mess...
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honeysempailover's avatar
Wow it's really good for your first poem! :wow: But I like the spanish more, it's the same though...:iconorzplz: